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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Brilliantly written as always. Your writing voice completely opens up the world to the reader and invokes a sense of crawling wonder.

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Benno's avatar

Love the mood and setting you established here and feel this one could grow bigger, maybe into a short story?

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Blace Alcock's avatar

You were the one I hoped to get the attention of most. Your poems are killer and you seem to be making big waves in that scene. Glad you enjoyed it, sir!

I haven’t written a prose poem in a while so it very well could read more like the beginning of a short than anything. Just gotta expand on it a bit haha.

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Benno's avatar

Thanks Blace, I appreciate the kinds words! And I'll certainly be interested to see what you come up with if you decide to expand it!

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Jorja's avatar

I love it!!

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Bence Ádók's avatar

Keep on Keeping On With The Good Stuff, Blace!

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